There should be a capital “T” at the beginning of your comment; “guys” is plural, it should have been “guy’s” referring to something belonging to the “guy”; there is only one “l” in “until”; I think you meant “we’ll” and not “well”; “I”, when referring to the first person is always a capital, not just at the beginning of a sentence. Finally, the entire phrasing is totally wrong for your last sentence. You seem to be implying that “tough shite” is either a person or entity of some sort. A simple comma between “if not” and “tough shite” would have been more appropriate. I hope this helps for your forthcoming interview as a streetsweeper.
[edited by mickrick on 12.03.2005 22:12]